Daddy's Little Girl!!!!
Crystal is a girl who has everything that she wants. She has a big home, a lot of friends and has a great room. Crystal is pretty. She has dirty blond hair that is shoulder length and has a great wardrobe. Crystal has many friends and lived in a place called Indian Heights. She has an older brother and an older sister. She has very nice parents and is daddy's little girl. She has a dog named Maddy and she is an airdale terrier. When she grows up she wants to be a pastry chef. Crystal may seem perfect but ther is something that is wrong with this picture. When her dad goes away Crystal's mom loses her mind! Crystal is left stranded. The closest family member to Massachusetts is her Aunt Cindy, but she is a loonitic. Let's just see how long Crystal can survive with Aunt Cindy while her dad is away for 1 whole year!
i wonder why she goes insane like that? sounds like a good story idea. i think you should make the aunt creepy and mysterious throughout the story and let the reader learn about her as the story goes. i wouldnt just flatout describe how she totally is when you're writing it.
ReplyDeletewhy does her dad have to leave? maybe in your story you could talk a little bit about that.also, why does her mom go insane?
ReplyDeleteI love your story ! When you start your story you could have some background info before you start off with your plot. I cant wait to read it!
ReplyDeletei think your story sounds really good! one thing: what happens to her mom and siblings when she goes to live with her aunt? can't wait to read the rest of the story!
ReplyDeleteYour story sounds so amazing. I would also like to now what happens with the rest of Crystal's siblings im looking forward to reading all of it.
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